Reviews for Learn to Trust
Saeger chapter 1 . 6/29/2005
I'm the exact opposite- I trust too readilly, too much... And i don't learn. But it's a good poem. I've read a few others, but can't think of anything to say... (I know, hearing that ticks me off, but it's the truth...)
nEurOtiCdiSOrdEr chapter 1 . 3/17/2005
i personally think that trusting someone pain free IS an unattainable dream... this is just my pessimistic thinking...

but i just couldn't learn... and they kept on hurting me... even if they don't know it... thats why i keep a pretty good distance... i like that distance...

i don't think i've helped u in any way... sry...
catseyeview chapter 1 . 2/9/2005
The word, the abstract of this feeling is so...what's the word I'm looking for "god-like," seems almost unreachable at times but you know when you do reach it, it feels good, kindof like reaching for heaven, hoping you don't fall during your flight there. I love your question! True heart of a philosopher.
deli-lise chapter 1 . 2/8/2005
trust is a big issue, especially for me. I think though that trust always comes with a price. You just have to figure out if your willing to pay the price or what. Your poem should be posted everywhere because it's what happens everyday. People give trust. People betray trust. This is a great poem. I'm going to make my friend read really needs to read it. lolkeep it up. Wanna read more. I'm a reading junkie. lol
Perfect Penmanship chapter 1 . 2/8/2005
pretty good...i thnk this is the first piece of ur work that ive written and i lik it A LOT!