Reviews for Dark Death
meaninglessTears chapter 1 . 5/30/2006
wow it's really thought out and it really makes u think, be able to actually see some of this happening. you did a great job. keep writing!
frezbo chapter 1 . 5/27/2006
wow! that is a fantastic, very effective poem! i really really enjoyed it! especially the last two lines "Well, goodbye, then,In case we don’t meet again…" they summed it all up perfectly! i really liked how you spaced out the stanzas, was just really really good! never stop writing, you're very talented!
Destiny Xavior chapter 1 . 2/13/2005
Again, I love your poem. It is really well written, I hope you write more for me and others to read.

Ruby Waters chapter 1 . 2/11/2005
hey, thanks 4 reviewing one of my poems..i'm sad to say that i do not understand ur poems as well as u do to mine...i dun get this line 'The maze of hallways won’t through to find the light' the won't through part is confusing but other than's good.