|Reviews for A Morning's Day|
| Honey Nut Loop and m-j chapter 1 . 2/18/2005
wow that's a fantastic poem. Though i think you tried to cram too many syllables into the last line. Maybe take out the a in a morning's day. I dunno. I just thought that line was a bit of a rest of it however was truly amazing.
| shie chapter 1 . 2/9/2005
wow. this was a truly awesome poem. i love it . realy it sounds like something a great poet would write about. anyway good job.