Reviews for My lover, Victor
Donald chapter 2 . 8/8/2014
I am very happy today for what God used doctor Zazaz the great spell caster to do in my life. My name is Donald Rocky i had a fight with my wife in the past which led to our breakup. I tried all i could to make her come back to me but she refuse and said it was over between us, one day i came across a testimony on the internet on how Doctor Zazaz used his spell to reunite two lovers so i decided to contact Doctor Zazaz via email and he assured me that my wife will come back to me within 12 to 16 hours after he has finish the preparation of the white magic spell.I am very glade today to tell the world that Doctor Zazaz is truly a man of his word because my wife came back to me and fell on her knees begging me to forgive her and accept her back. Do you have a problem then also contact Doctor Zazaz today via email: or you can contact him via website .com
smith1900 chapter 1 . 4/28/2014
if it is africa 95 percent of the spell casters there are fake ..my name is smith from canada..i have been scammed by 2 different spell casters named dr shagi and dr arango until i came across dr idunga via facebook..he told me if i get the items and he work for me i can pay him anything i can afford, he worked with sincerity for me and in 6 days my inlaws called me plead to me that my ex wife want me back but dont know how to do it directly, she came to the following day and we are happy again..am thanking dr idunga for his sincere work which is lacking among african spell casters.. am also using this medium to tell you all to beware of scammer and try to know one cos dr idunga will follow due process before anything that has do with finance..his contact is or 2348113076524
Luiza.ldshotmai chapter 2 . 1/18/2014
Fuck you writer! Im crying so bad right now. Please tell me this isn't base on anything real cause if it is I'm seriously taking a sabbatical and going to a therapist. This story is more than awesome and it really makes a difference in the internet, i was losing hope of a real touching story, there aren't many. This one is a very special story and i hope you have a chance to become writer or something. I would buy your books, for sure.
ANN chapter 1 . 8/13/2013
Sometimes,Life can be very displeasing especially when we loose the ones we love and cherish so much. in this kind of situation where one loses his/her soul mate there are several dangers engage in it. one may no longer be able to do the things he was doing before then success will be very scarce and happiness will be rare. that person was created to be with you for without him things may fall apart. That was my experience late last year. but thank god today i am happy with him again. all thanks goes to Dr. EDIONWE, i was nearly loosing hope until i saw an article on how Dr. EDIONWE could cast a love spell to make lovers come back. There is no harm in trying, i said to my self. i contacted him via email: . words will not be enough to appreciate what he has done for me. i have promised to share the good news as long as i live.
Helena chapter 1 . 4/11/2013
Hello Dr. Lametu ,I had my doubts about magic spells and I never think I would have dared to just hire any spell caster randomly. That's why I consulted you Dr. Lametu first. I mean, it is my life we are talking about! I can't just let any one mess with my future. Long story short: Dr. Lametu did his analysis and then told me what specific spell that would work best for me. For me and my specific case. Well, he was correct and now, 3 days after I had the spell cast, my ex broke up with his girlfriend and came running. He begged to come back to me! That's exactly as I wanted it to be ;)"I thank you a lot.
wrongthing chapter 2 . 3/11/2013
OK. I understand that there's a bunch of sad, depressing and deep stuff going on with victor, but the character who actually made me cry was joseph. Because he was just a bystander who got caught in the actual plot, but I can't stand that Mike used him like that. What a complete and total tool. I don't care how hopeless your other love seems, or what other shit you have going on, I can't stand the fact that Mike thought it was alright on any level to hurt Joseph like that. Yes, he did think about how wrong it was that he was hurting him, but just thinking about how bad something is then not actually doing anything about it is just about as bad as what transgression you're actually committing. He shouldn't have even started anything up with Joseph. Who are we kidding with the whole "trying to move on" bullshit? We knew that he was stuck on Victor and there's no way he was ever going to be serious about Joseph. He was just going to settle and who the fuck ever likes to be settled on? Joseph was sad because almost no one actually liked him except for Mike, and you can argue that that came out of guilt that wasn't quite recognized. Love the story, but i hate the fact the Mike totally used Joseph like that.
mamaliz chapter 2 . 6/28/2012
Wow, what an amazing story. I ended up crying like a baby at the end. What a beautiful, perfect and sad story.

I love how all the characters are real human beings rather than clich├ęs: None of them are flawless, they all do wrong at times but with the best intentions in mind (except for Victor's mum of course). They are all both caring and selfish, just like most people in real life.

I don't really think the baby's death was necessary for the story, I mean Victor had plenty of reasons to want to end his life as it was; he was already depressed and suicidal. Perhaps you were afraid that the readers would hate Victor otherwise? Well, I certainly didn't hate him and I didn't hate Michael either.
sick at heart chapter 2 . 12/5/2011
Hey, this story was so amazing and heartbreaking and well-written. I had tears in my eyes while reading a few scenes.

Okay, right off the bat, I hated Victor. Right from the start I thought he was a dickhead. I only ever kind of liked him because the narrator loved him and I always have to love whatever the narrator loves because it's his thoughts and feelings. But just, everything about him was so annoying. I feel bad saying that because he turned out to be a great brother and everything and he did have a terrible home environment. But still, he had Mikey. So I feel like he should have been okay.

I absolutely loved Joseph and the entire story I just wanted Mike to fall in love with Joseph and leave Victor. I hate that he kept judging Joseph over dumb things like being too neat, perfect, and geeky. He was sweet and lovable and he deserved someone so much better. I haven't read your other stories yet but I hope there's one featuring Joe.

Michael was a complete ass, which was okay, because I love reading about characters that are asses. But seriously, he didn't do anything right. Half the time he was with Victor, I felt like he barely cared about him or he acted really disinterested. So, that was pretty interesting. I want Michael and Victor to go to hell and Joseph to live happily ever after.

Also, the ending. Wow. I could feel it coming and I didn't really like that. It was tragic and everything but it was too predictable. Of course Victor commits suicide. But all the other characters were so stupid about it. Did Mike and Charlene really not suspect anything when they got the letters from him? It was so obvious that he was gonna kill himself, and they didn't stop him for some reason. And Mike didn't even feel bad about not realizing he was gonna kill himself when he got the letter. He is the biggest dolt. I skimmed through the part where they find the body cause I thought it was so dumb.

I hate to say it, because it was such a great story overall and really heart-wrenching, but I thought the suicide was too cliche. And Victor was supposed to have redeemed himself with the whole taking care of Shanti thing, but he was still selfish as hell for killing himself. And making Mike and Charlene find him? Really? What an attention whore and loser. I feel like you could've written a better ending that was bittersweet, without being overly tragic and cliched.

Anywho, I hate criticizing such a great story, but I had to get that out. K, gonna read your other stories now. Cheers!
SilverSymbol chapter 2 . 6/27/2011
Whoa.
Deewhan chapter 1 . 5/12/2011
This story was something else felt like it grabbed me around the neck and heart simultaneously. Loved it very engaging, well written, just a very lovely story. Not one much for the tales that pull at the heartstrings, but this one is very realistic, importantly so.
Reese Weston chapter 2 . 4/6/2011
This? Absolutely amazing, not that you need to be told that again ;) The writing is... oh my God, I'm not even sure. It's so... GOOD. Insanely so. I'm not even sure what to call it, really. I'm just so, so impressed with the writing in itself that I'm having a hard time getting past that. There's not a lot of prose like yours to be found online, so it's a treat when I come across it.

So, Victor. He's insanely, insanely real. I hate that he was too chickenshit to actually do anything about his problems, but I love it, too, because it's so real to know something's wrong, but refuse to acknowledge it. I feel so bad for him about his home life and damn, DAMN, the bit with his youngest sister broke my heart. I knew Victor was going to die, and that didn't get me-the bit about his sister did. The fact that his mother was so... uncaring, the fact that Victor took her on as his own child, essentially, and the whole thing with killing her and just ohmygod, broke my heart. :( Seriously. I just. God. I can't even begin to articulate where I want to go with that.

I LOVED Mike and Dane's relationship, how Dane was so much of a teenager without being a teenager, how when he got Kelly pregnant he was terrified and eventually willing to take on the kid... I love how his and Brennan's relationship turned into something so much more meaningful than just two teen boys fucking, because while that's fine and dandy for some stories, I can't imagine this one being like that. (Although, let's be honest; Dane was probably my favorite character and I do love how he changed.)

I also loved Joseph, and while I get that his relationship with Mike would never have worked, I'm still so pissed that Mike figured he could lead him on, sleeping with Victor on the side, while criticizing Victor for thinking he could just marry a woman. The slow decline of Mike and Victor's relationship, though, hot damn. I couldn't see it until it was right on top of me.

But, it's all so, so real. That's what's heartbreaking, I think. Because it all feels so true.

In short: awesome, heartbreaking characters and damned powerful writing. Thank you for sharing this. I'm just disappointed I didn't catch it earlier.
KoeSkriver chapter 2 . 3/7/2011
Sad and very gripping. I really like the inner dialogue and realistic reflections.
methosdeb chapter 2 . 7/24/2010
loved this ,you really should put a note on this note to read late at night alone ,subject to tears.I was so glad I was home was such a sad ending ,I just wanted someone to be able to reach poor Victor and poor michael I do not think he will last long alone.
Chronically Creative chapter 2 . 1/4/2010
So, I spent hours reading this and to be honest, I'm glad Victor died. I loved him, don't get me wrong, but I was in the mood for angst and my friend reccomended this story, so if it would have been a happily ever after, I would have been disapointed. lol. I love the fact that it happened because it made the whole story realistic. Only thing left to say is bravo!

- Chronically Creative
tata chapter 1 . 7/20/2009
the way you organize the chapters is kinda hurting my eyes, but the story's worth it. I think my condition is bad enough, but i know now that things always can be worse,, there is always other who goes through worse. I don't care whether this is only fictional or not, it still gave me something to learn,, and a sane reason to cry. God,, I love Victor. He's the Brother of the Century.
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