Reviews for Before Man Lost the Ability to Dream
Jason Kendrick Pape chapter 1 . 2/21/2005
This reminds me of when I memorized Mercutio's Queen Mab speech from Romeo And Juliet... You really have a way with words, and I'd like to see you write a longer work some day. Seriously, the quality of your prose is beyond that of an amateur, which is something I very rarely see in literary hobbyists.
symphonynumbernine chapter 1 . 2/10/2005
very well written. very touching. i think this could also be in the essay section but hey i'm not complaining. its beautiful written piece of work. quite sad too.

i don't know what else to a talented writer, that can be evidently seen.
Hitbier chapter 1 . 2/10/2005
The story gives off a sad radiance. I agree with the story though, man truly has lost the ability to dream. I enjoy dreaming, I do it doing my free time, but people, as your story says, really need to get out and imagine.

I enjoyed this story, and I think you will make a great writer someday if you wanted to. Keep writing!