|Reviews for The Outsider|
| Mirstirs chapter 1 . 2/11/2005
Neato! I like the sort of graphicness of this. Your writing really communicates your struggle(s?). Are you the "she"? I what you meen by being at the brink of something... Rock on!-M
| a friend chapter 1 . 2/10/2005
i think i know what you are getting at. it makes snese in a beautiful way. keep up the good work i like your style.