Reviews for First Ten Times
Bubbly Girl chapter 1 . 3/20/2011
I'm sure that plenty other people have told you this but i just wanted to tell you that you have 2 eights:

"The eighth time you talked to me was when you handed me a white envelope."

"The eighth time you talked to me was a greeting on the first day back from break."

I just wanted to let you know. :) Great story! I really liked how you wrote it. :)

Peace, Love and Happiness! :)

~Bubbly Girl
TeenageDreams chapter 1 . 2/5/2011
I cannot even begin to describe how beautiful this story is. But I just want to say that this is simply wonderful. It truly touched my heart and brought tears to my eyes towards the end. To be Wicca would be a dream come true. It would be the near perfect life. Near perfect because I believe 'Nothing is ever perfect'. Keep up the amazing work.
Damned to heaven chapter 1 . 8/28/2010
The jock and the rock chick.

I'm in love with this story.

I loved the layout- the ten times they met- it flows.

I can't find any faults but yeah love the cliche yet not so cliched story.
Genato chapter 1 . 4/17/2010
sweet. one thing though, in his letter he said that he likes dancing with her... when that happened a mere few hours before? Like, I assumed he wrote the letter before the dance... and you have mixed the conversation with the details? It would've been better if there were quotation marks or soemthing to differentiate it. :)

anyways. SUPER CLICHE. but really lovable. I LIKE! :)
resplendent chapter 1 . 2/10/2010
This is so sweet
Twilight Starr chapter 1 . 3/24/2008
Cute story. It was an enjoyable read. Good luck with writing, this story, and life. Have a fantastic day.

~Twilight Starr~
ohheyitscindyk chapter 1 . 11/28/2007
aw... this has to be my favorite oneshot of all time.

usually i don't really enjoy reading oneshots (i don't know why), but yours caught my attention.

i loved how you didn't give them names. for some reason i feel a better connection to the characters when they don't have names.

i especially liked the letter exchanging between them. not many oneshots have that kind of idea. it was nice to read something different.

great beginning & ending, both of which are hard to achieve.
ess3sandra chapter 1 . 9/21/2007
damn, that was utterly romatic and oh so lovelie.
yarrowicefrost chapter 1 . 9/9/2007
There were so many things that made me go 'Aw' in this one-shot, I really don't know where to start. Suffice to say, I really enjoyed reading it.

Cheers! :d
Kjersti aurora borealis1 chapter 1 . 8/23/2007
What does it say about this story when I end up reading it *three times*? It's just great. I adore it. It's incredibly sweet and well written. Cudos to you. :)
Saphimire Karishnikova chapter 1 . 8/16/2007
.. Why are there two eighth times? It doesn't really matter though, because the story is AWESOME! Loved it~~ _
aurora borealis chapter 1 . 6/12/2007
This is such a sweet story. I've actually read it once before, but couldn't remember if I reviewed it or not, and then I just had to read it again... It's so cute. I love it. :)
brittle hearts chapter 1 . 6/8/2007
So beautiful.
JojoAnn chapter 1 . 5/8/2007
This reminds me of my crush and I, except I'm not wiccan... and neither is he. But the joking and the chemistry between them. I had tears in my eyes but I didn't unleash them, because my family is near. I loved this so much, and it's going on my favorites list where I can read it over and over again. Thank you for writing it.
candii-apple chapter 1 . 4/14/2007
*squeals loudly* OMG THAT WAS SO SWEET! *sigh* so sweet...i love happy endings!
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