oh! spooky. There are some words, like 'much needed,' that are unnesscessary, they hold up the rythm of the piece but otherwise, good job.

As I said before...I

I still say it sounds kinky, luv. And maybe it's just me, but I feel like the lines in stanza three should be shortened a bit to make it sound easier...

You reviewed my poems, thanky ou so much for your kind words! So I thought it only fair to give yours a peek. This poem was very well done! The use of repetition stresses the significance of certain and words and phrases, very well done!

sounds like a wicked-cool time!

That was brilliant. I loved it. Great job, I'd love to read more of your work in the future! Wicked good...okay, that was just cheesy. Great poem!

~Mlle. Daae