|Reviews for Life Passing By|
| jmhwriter chapter 1 . 7/3/2005
"Once I get close you allow me to fall, each fall makes getting back up harder" - these lines are a brilliant way to say that emotion, I can relate to it because I feel it everyday.
"I look around and I see life, a life that I cannot have" - again I can relate; feeling this everyday.
Those lines inparticular caught my attention. This poem all round though, is truly amazing. Great job with this one.
| Decaying Dreams chapter 1 . 2/18/2005
I like how you wrote this- but.. Jus' don't sit back.. Thats no the way to do it! Might be scared, but you have to face the fears at some point!(Thanks for the review)
| Kailah Lea chapter 1 . 2/14/2005
I really liked this poem. It fits exactly how I feel right now. Keep up the great work.
| kachuu chapter 1 . 2/13/2005
"Once I get close you allow me to fallEach fall makes getting back up harder"
| sarcastic-student chapter 1 . 2/13/2005
So true. Very eloquently written. Nice job.
| Quaint Feathers Unavailable chapter 1 . 2/13/2005
wow, powerful poem there, it describes how i sometimes feel about others, keep up the good work!
| mormonboy chapter 1 . 2/12/2005
Dude, I can really relate. I always have some people who I think are my friends and they just abandon me. It hate it.
| r0x0r j00 b0x0r5 chapter 1 . 2/12/2005
it was goodkeep writing :)
| foreverXfall chapter 1 . 2/11/2005
once again, very nice job