Hi thanks for givivng my piece a review. This story really brings out the essence of life. Keep writing you never know it my become published

Holy crap. You really captured the whole essence of love: the idiocy, the pain, the insecurity, the agony, the (babbles on randomly). Okay. I'm done babbling about that. It's and ezcellent poem, extremely captivating. I'm tempted to print it possibly memorize it. I have to go. Dacey's coming.~Livve :'(