|Reviews for Lifeline|
| Thyrt chapter 1 . 6/1/2005
one word for this..brilliant
| Aslan Israel chapter 1 . 3/1/2005
Hm. Interesting. Don;t know why, but I like it. It speaks to me...
| LauraKM chapter 1 . 2/19/2005
Very true,well observed, great rythm. I like the ryhming, it's hard to get right but it works really well here. good job
| Clap Clap Raise Your Hands chapter 1 . 2/19/2005
I like this, it's really clever, especially :
And a kiss to the night bird
As it clings with the chains
I love that, thanks for sharing x
| aquamoon222 chapter 1 . 2/17/2005
Very insightfull! I like it alot!
| Bloody Doll chapter 1 . 2/17/2005
I really saw those words. So well written.
| simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 2/12/2005
i like it.. teh beginning is cool and the two lines in the middle are awesome & so is the ending
| PyroChica chapter 1 . 2/12/2005
Wow! That was excellent. Make sure you definatley keep writing. And thanks for R&R my poem!