Reviews for I Need You Here Now
A Face Worth Remembering chapter 1 . 3/16/2005
So true. I like it. Great job

penname1920 chapter 1 . 3/4/2005
everything you want is in the present, but everything you felt true is in the everything you described in the past in one line. your writing is great. thanks so much for your reviews. i love your poems keep em up! looking forward to more! :)
estrela chapter 1 . 3/2/2005
thats so sad... it's simply stated, and lovely at the same time!
under estimated artistsoul chapter 1 . 2/28/2005
So heartfelt, I can relate. Theres always that missing the one you've fallen in love with and you don't want to even think of living without them so yeah, its a great poem.
SportylilChica chapter 1 . 2/27/2005
I loved the whole thing! I especially liked the last line! Great job!

morbidme chapter 1 . 2/26/2005
I have nothingI am nothing

You were everything to me

it s amazing how in these 3sentencces you can pack and conatin so much emotion and power i love it XmeX
Suicidal Skies chapter 1 . 2/19/2005
The raw emotion in this was amazing.
Clap Clap Raise Your Hands chapter 1 . 2/18/2005
I can totally relate to this... Love the last line especially x
Armas Apple chapter 1 . 2/18/2005
Hm. I don't know why, but that kinda sang out in my head. It had a nice tune. La la.. _
origamikitty chapter 1 . 2/17/2005
I prefer punctuation, but your style is of course different than mine. The poem was sad. Ex-boyfriends suck. Well.. missing them does at least.
xHannahx chapter 1 . 2/17/2005
that is so true. the simplicity matches the feeling. nice job.

Ivriniel chapter 1 . 2/17/2005
Wow, this is sad. I really like each and every word of this poem.
queenvixta chapter 1 . 2/17/2005
Really like it. Great first verse. Powerful and deep. Well done. QueenVixta
ApplesCM chapter 1 . 2/16/2005
Aww, a sweet little poem. :( You'll get over him, I'm sure.
KonekOniko chapter 1 . 2/15/2005
aw, it's okay. look at it this way: guys will come and go, but good friends will there forever. (my friends have started an army against my ex, I guess that's what true friends do -). That poem was brilliant, well worded, and flowed. Good job, hope to see more from ya!

~Sumi-chan; What you call love, I call pain.
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