I thought it sounded familiar. Cool.

this is getting interesting..

i hope u update soon..

love it!

woot... More?

Hahaha, another update? Almost a year after you first posted it... wowers. At least you didn't give up on your work.

I gave up on mine... Sort of. I took them down off FP and I've been working on them in private. I'll post them back up later...hopefully :S

I got a job too. And I finished school since I last spoke to you...and I got into UNIVERSITY!

How cool is that? I don't start until early March next year. It's mad.

The name "Farquard" reminds me of that guy in Shrek 1... "Lord Farqaurd". And how they made jokes about his height...lol.

You said "Trinh" as the first word in the first sentence in scene two... Trinh is in the other story, lol. You said Trinh a few times more as well, lol. So you should change them to Tiana. Getting your stories mixed up?

When are you going to update "Flashbacks of Your Past Life"?

I'll take a look at this chapter and edit it for you if you want (I’m not that great, but I know a thing or two). I'll do that sometime soon. If I don't then you can email me and remind me (I'm forgetful). My email is on my profile page, I go under Ellabella for my profile...

So I’ll do that if you want… But right now I have to go. Cya!

Ellabella

GET WRITING NOW!

did you know you stopped on chapter 3...hm theres a slight problem with that, you see i was kinda hoping there would be another chapter after that, so i could continue reading b/c i REALLY REALLY LIKE THIS STORY...i've also read 'sinners debt' i love it to, and i love how your doing the devil in yours to! i can't wait till you update!

"“I did not get told," - i was not told

" he was most shocked he was most shocked when " 2x

"“Alright. Angels’ black in their eyes are slightly smaller..." er..black in their eyes? Do u mean the pupils?

"annoyed that even once he is dead he manages to still annoy him' - annoyed that even though he was dead, he still managed to annoy (bother may sound better) him...? *shrugs*

"but his is passing onto you this task' but HE is...

" I could have changed her, right?" change her? Srry if i forgot something... good chapter, i hope it doesn't bother you that i point out and nitpick *shrugs* i find it helpful when people do it to me so i hope it helps you. please update!

i'm slightly confused. lets recap. mathew is the devil? or was because he died and now tyson is the devil? tyson is dareks brother? correct? and trinity was the woman with whom mathew was in love with correct? and she married an angel and had a baby- tiana. tiana was claimed by the devil after he killed trinity and martin. and since tyson has a wife, of sorts then trinity is darek's to take? so this is the whole bond they all share. she is bound to him through a power of the devils oath yet she is half angel so the powers conflict and there's your story! am i right? it should be good. i think you need to compound your story more. it seems all over the place and i had to go back and reread chapters 1 and 2 as well as 3, to understand. it might be because you haven't updated in a while. anyway, i'll see you next update :D.

ellabella

p.s.- gotta love the demon related stories like 'the contract' by bleeding air. i have a plot set out on my computer that i'll work with at a later date. i hope it turns out good. right now i'm working on a werewolf related story, but i'm not posting it because i don't know whether i'd have the commitment to keep going and i don't want to be one of those authors that drop the story and never ever update again, once it starts getting good... oh wait! i already am! cya!

excellant chapter. You have me hooked and I hope you update quick, cause im not very patient :) Hugglz,Sara

good chappie! i wonder where you are going to go wit this..to make he brother more realistic, maybe you could inclue some undercurrents between them, both obvious and hidden. update, please!

~birdytamel~

interesting beginning...could be slowed down, maybe more thouhts of the man, last memories, wishes, dreams, rerets...but i like it!

~birdytamel~

well i was naughty. i didn't recognise who you were until you thanked me for the other reviews.

you succeeded; i don't recognise this style as yours. it's good that you've written out a plot (plan) to follow (not fallow). a story isn't good without a plot, the author looses interest and ideas and eventually stuffs up. i'm interested, i would also like to see an update of 'Flashbacks Of Your Past Life'. i miss it. cya next chapter/s.

ellabella

aw, so sad. great prolgue. i gotta go, i'll review next chapter. this is pretty damn awesome. cya

ellabella

R material? Doesn't seem to have much violence, language, nor sexuality. Maybe you can lower the rating for a broader audience.