This is awesome! it took me a while to read but it was well worth it! Please write more, this is really good the imagery you create is so *gasp* real, i'm so putting this on alerts!

ahh...u have updated lolnice work, vey good writing here, no mistakes that i see _so the plot is starting up fianlly lol-BLi've updated mine as well...could u R&R pls?

Hello again _good job, this is a nice chpnice action, interesting plot so fardon't see any errors-BLhey, think u can R&R my fic?its called eternal strife chp 1

_ nice plot, its new and a fresh reprieve from all those common subjects...-BL