Reviews for Thou Hast
Guest chapter 1 . 2/20/2005
beautiful..."Thou Hast" seems to flow so well. i love the ending. i think it's great you put your faith and belief in your writing.
unperfect blood chapter 1 . 2/17/2005
A silent hope that still exist, you give me inspiration from you poems where many of other peoples poems have left me empty and with no real feeling. Good job please keep writing
suzieque2 chapter 1 . 2/13/2005
Hmm one must guess that the Psalms are a great influence on your work. For it moves my spirit as do the works of David. Amen! Beautiful and lovely. full of light!
A Face Worth Remembering chapter 1 . 2/13/2005
You have a gift for making things have a double meaning. Like, it seems so simple on the surface, bbut if you look a bit deeper, it's much more complex and...can't think of the word i was going to put here. But you get the idea. Good job!

THROUGHTHESEEYES chapter 1 . 2/13/2005
Disturbing feeling in the first half then one of relief because of faith in Him. Great job!
under estimated artistsoul chapter 1 . 2/13/2005
Very well written, I actually enjoy reading poems that aren't always about suicide, but those that are related to religion, I'm trying to strenght my religion and reading something like this makes it all worth the while. Nice work, keep it ,Thrish