really cool. *thinks*

I can't build off something this good

ish still confused. i can't write stuff like this, so sorry!

BOBBEH. I AM GOING TO EAT YOU. Finish the story yourself. It's not that hard. I WILL bite you. And if you call be a dumbass again I will never join wafflespot. You have a good start, just make it longer. GET TO IT, BOB!

I wish the prologue was longer. Despite it's lack in length, it is a strong beginning. Are you telling me that you can't continue this? I think you can. You've got a great start and a potentially good character. I just wish you had finished the note and dedided to continue the story. Anywho... Good times at any case. :D

Oh god, thats a really good opening. I wish I could finish it but I would feel like I was plagerizing.

You should try to write.

wow...love the way u started it. Im kinda confused...are u really challeging us to write a story lyk tht? Or, where u just saying tht? Well...i am hope U write the story, cz u seem to know what u r doing! Update!