i'm loving it so far. i love the characters. however, just on a technical note, usually when you write, you shouldn't use conjunctions. its just a rule i was taught. i keep reading things like "must've" and the like. you should write it out like "must have" instead. *shrug* i suppose its up to u.

keep it up

i think its great so far. really, i think the background is a really good idea. And yet you get the feeling that there's more to learn about her. however the prologue i think needs to be developed more. however, i'm loving the story so far. keep it up.

This is pretty good work. Very descriptive and detailed, from the people to the history of the land itself.

But what I liked most about it was how they use magic, using strings of beads, very original. Especially the levitation spell, using the beads like a remote control of sorts. But the thing was that at first I thought when you said she wrote spells it meant literally wrote, meaning scrolls and paper and pens and stuff like that.

I also like the character development of Teraania, it seems you have a very clear picture of who she is and how to portray her.

The only problem I see is that there's no real plot. Mostly so far it has just been her living out her life. The introduction of those three Craw islanders might be a clue, but if it was, it was very subtle.

Not a bad story..I've got a few questions, though..one, is this set in the real world, or what? Two, what exactly are these tabs you keep speaking of? I'm rather confused as to what they actually are...but other than that, it's a pretty good story.