Reviews for Yesterday to Today chapter 1 . 7/15/2005
Nice biographical poem. I like how you mix basic things (eating a sandwich) with something major (committing suicide).
randomunknown chapter 1 . 4/28/2005
This is really cool, i can completely relate! I like the 'co ordinates' part.
Kaywyn chapter 1 . 4/23/2005
a little choppy, but you can easily get the point of the poem. But oddly the choopyness works, even to make a kind of weird rythem...
Tell me its not true chapter 1 . 4/5/2005
this has real truth in it, its great!
Cadience Gemma Topaz chapter 1 . 3/25/2005
Totally awsome, this one speaks of an all to common subject in my head lol...i believe that we make our own choices but it has already been seen and determind...i don't know if that makes sense, they say that we are .03 seconds behind, like every action is a reaction, our reaction to an action is a bit behind...i hope u understand what i'm sayin'~Megan~
method acting chapter 1 . 3/11/2005
Hmm...I like the topic, very true. But sometimes its nice to belive that someone is wathcing over you or whatever, but sometimes its better to know that you are in control. Anyways, wonderful...:-)
nine iron chapter 1 . 2/14/2005
Not bad, it is hard starting out on this site, good luck with it.

Nine Iron