|Reviews for Our world my world|
| Eirien chapter 1 . 4/10/2005
Beautiful in its own way, and quite unique, this poems gets one to think about many things, the inspirations for poetry, the things that really matter in life ... I like the unconventional approach and the message you convey, as well as the fact that the poem doesn't nail you down, but is quite open to different interpretations.
| Cadience Gemma Topaz chapter 1 . 3/23/2005
I definately love this subject, it's so true, its only us and things that make us different but down deep where it matters we are all the same, in a good way.
| Rio Madeira chapter 1 . 2/14/2005
I agree with you completely. Someday the majority of the population will get the hint that not everyone likes what they like. I could go on for hours about the subject of conformity, but I'd rather not.
P.S. This situation in the poem of mine that you reviewed goes like this: I met a guy, we became friends, I liked him, I thought he liked me, we had a falling out, we became friends again, I was still attracted to him, I thought he still liked me, I decided he didn't, I was still kind of attracted to him but not nearly as much, I got a crush on another guy who paid more attention to me. (Whew!) Thanks for the review, by the way.
| nine iron chapter 1 . 2/14/2005
Wow, great end, i like it!