Reviews for simple love kiss
somefreakylooknchick chapter 1 . 6/20/2005
you lovesick little puppy. It's kind of cute and nausiating at the same time. You're poems aren't nausiating though. Very mellow. Good uh.. rhyming
method acting chapter 1 . 5/22/2005
Ryming a tad forced, but the idea was created well, and the imagry was great. Good job.
dustytiger chapter 1 . 3/17/2005
i like this peice a lot, it's almost like a wish, it's great, thanx for the reviews!