Reviews for before my last breath
InterestedAndSilent chapter 1 . 3/17/2005
good, uo to 'I'm Going To Make You Feel Like Your Really In Heaven' gets kinda long after a while, if ya feel like editing it a bit try just altering it, just a little, it was a little difficult to read, but maybe that's how you ment it to be, wonderful job though, oh yeah, thanks for the review
InterestedAndSilent chapter 1 . 3/17/2005
good, uo to 'I'm Going To Make You Feel Like Your Really In Heaven' gets kinda long after a while, if ya feel like editing it a bit try just altering it, just a little, it was a little difficult to read, but maybe that's how you ment it to be, wonderful job though, oh yeah, thanks for the review
Syrins chapter 1 . 2/15/2005
After the first 10 times, I got the point of you wanting to make them laugh...