Reviews for Lie
somefreakylooknchick chapter 1 . 6/20/2005
whoa. You were obviously angry when you wrote this, which is good. I can't relate considering I'm a girl and I've never had a boyfriend, but I can't definatly feel the intensity of these words.
method acting chapter 1 . 5/22/2005
The ryming was cute, but you could have made this whole thing deeper. the emtions and imagry were true, but you could have taken this further. made it deeper. Not bad though.