|Reviews for Stay|
| Rosanna28 chapter 1 . 5/29/2005
Hey ya Hawke! You haven't posted anything in such a long time, so I thought I'd ask you how you're doing and what's up! And the best way to do that is by reviewing eh? _
So I hope you're gonna post something really soon, cause you know I love your work! Hope everything's ok with Matthew?
Anyway, hope you post soon!
Much love, Rosanna.
| apromptedpoet chapter 1 . 2/26/2005
Wow. Yet another amazing poem.
I think I like this one a bit more than the other one. Don't ask me why.
I love the language you used in this. And the idea of wilted flowers was nice too. (I hate using that word, "nice"..It seems so dull, don't you think?)
All in all, I think you did a great job. Not a surprise! _
| SayIt'sWrong chapter 1 . 2/17/2005
Excellent rhyming and imagery. I could kind of picture it all in my mind. Beautiful use of words. Well done. QueenVixta