Reviews for I´m Sorry
ShadowPharoh chapter 1 . 6/23/2005
the use of the parentheses really added to the flow of the poem. excellent job!

geegi chapter 1 . 6/22/2005
this is very interesting, and at times it was a bit confusing to read. im not sure if thats how it was suppose to be, but it was still wonderful

you have a true gift and al you need to do is let it shine through through ur read my short story at ~geegi and my lord of the rings novel at ~geegi

thank yougeegi
darkmistresslae chapter 1 . 4/12/2005
nice poem... well written
MaskedMarionette chapter 1 . 4/11/2005
er... that was kinda confusing the first time I read it, but then I read it again and I think I got it. nice job!
Tell me its not true chapter 1 . 4/10/2005
It's different unique, like it.
Eirien chapter 1 . 4/10/2005
Quite interesting, I like the contrasts presented in this and the way you play with the notions of seeing/ not seeing or not wanting to see, opening/ closing, shutting in/ shutting out etc.
Freddie of Albion chapter 1 . 2/15/2005
This again, like the other is a very emotionally strong piece of work. It's interesting and very farmiliar in some way I can't describe.