Reviews for My Armored Strength
Laramie Chruse chapter 1 . 4/8/2005
The rhyme scheme change up at the end put the "umph" into the point you were trying to make with the armored strength.

I love the first two lines the most I think.
Silver Smiley chapter 1 . 4/1/2005
I liked it, but I'm not sure if you meant to or not but you changed the rhyming scheme at the end. And then the last line just didn't flow with the rest of the poem. Besides that, I loved it.