Reviews for Fading Dream
Russell chapter 1 . 8/27/2007
This seems like a fading memory. A love that has been lost perhaps?

Good description, not overly done to make the reader feel looked down upon, but done enough so you can get something out of it.

Good good.
aquamoon222 chapter 1 . 2/21/2005
It sounds like a memory that she can't get rid of. Very lovey. I really like this!

:)Thanks for the review, and yes, that's what I meant the rain to be, you're very cleaver!:)
Uru'Loki Kaimelar chapter 1 . 2/15/2005
very nice. general so that people can get what they see out of it but specific enough so that they know at least what your trying to say to them.
Ruweyna chapter 1 . 2/15/2005
Ooh. Awesome inded. I love the detail you give to the poem. It makes the poem all the more riviting.