more please.

Oh my GOSH! Hot elvish boy! heh heh heh eh *Chokes when laughing* I'M OKAY! lollollol! I love Baby antics it is SOO funny! heh... I laughed my butt off when I read the spiderman part.. lol... heh heh

PEACE (Perfection, ease, affection, care, everlasting LURVE!)

Please i'd really like to know, whats happening between quien and taeth. Did he really like her? or was he just trying to save her? if not will they ever hook up? I'm kinda confused

omg that story is hilarious! creepily enough, baby reminds me of one of my many brothers (i have 6 bros and a sis and i'm the oldest, bleh. i'm glad that she gets Taeth, he's my fav. elf. he sounds so uber hott! lol. ur rele good at writing stories like this. Quinn almost reminds me of myself. well, keep writing 'cause ur good at it. can't wait to read another one of ur stories (and yes i do relize i am reviewing the story 2 years after it was finished but w/e, i'm jus cool like that.)

Interesting story...it would be insane to have that many siblings! lol

A very funny story but wheres the romance?

hey i know this may be kinda late to submit a review...but i just found fictionpress and your stories...so far i have read the story:finding time to play with pink duct tape and i think its great! keep up the good work...:D

Amazingly amusing story. :) I was very amused by the constant tie-in of "spoons!" Baby is... quite interesting. Good story, very fun.

...weird but abso-freaking-lutely HIlarious.

*is cracking up*

XD CD

...ohmigod... I've read this before!

And I still like it!

did I review this the last time I read it?

*checks* oops, guess not. Sorry.

*reads on*

:) CD

GREAT STORY THEA!(or whatever your name really is.) Yeah, it had no plot until the last 2 chapters, but that's part of its appeal. Good Job! Yay! The end of this story generated a real warm fuzzy feeling.

The poor Lorens, all these weird elves keep just...WALKING into their house and yard and stuff and saying and doing weird things. Hm, Jaan's bad, huh? I like him better now, I always like the bad guys. (They seemed to get rid of the evil king in their kitchen too easily, though...that was kind of a letdown.)

Ok, thanx, not so confused now. The story is coming to its climax...(dun-dun-DUN...*scary music if you cant tell*) Hey, I kind of liked the nerds, they were funny. The Airheads deserved Baby, though. Baby, ROCK ON!

This story is completely insane.(In Japanese, atamagaokashii means insane, did you know that?) Imagining that last scene...atamagaokashii. It was funny, of course, though, but I am a bit confused. Stupid Venusvadore, she always has to like the same people that I like.

Ha, good chapter. (Do I ever have anything ELSE to say? well, it WAS!) I like Derek second best, he reminds me of myself on bad days, and on some good days. Now, who has showed up now...