Reviews for a wishing desire
welchs828 chapter 1 . 5/27/2005
This is a sweet poem. It reminds me of a palace, sort of. You're the king and you're in love and there's only one thing you want, and you will do anything for it, and no less. And there'll be no disappointments. I especially love the ending where you just burst out with emotion, gushing compliments and your true feelings. I'm also very proud of you: you didn't call her "hot." That's a pretty good compliment to call a girl "hot," but what most girls want to hear (without prodding) is that they're "pretty" or "beautiful." And you used both here. Boy, she ought to be blushing and flattered!

Awesome, sweet, gentleman-ish poem! Keep it up.


-Paige :-)