|Reviews for Burn|
| Silentwriter9 chapter 1 . 4/10/2005
wow. i know this feeling oh so well. Nice job with this poem. I really like the last stanza.
Thank you for the review on "Drawing Him In" did you see the link to the picture in my bio?
| Wing Chant chapter 1 . 3/8/2005
Gah, I hate it when you hold in things you wish you could blurt outloud to someone you love. But as you keep procrastinating to tell them, you finally lose them altogether. It's gay how that works! (
| Mistress of Eternity chapter 1 . 3/7/2005
Lovely... I felt like this once, so I can definetly relate :(
| aeolyn chapter 1 . 3/1/2005
Wow, now that was a really good poem. Strong emotions in this. Great job!
| aquamoon222 chapter 1 . 2/22/2005
Wow, that has some power! Very strong ending. I just love this!:)
I was wondering if maybe you'd R&R a new poem of mine called All I ever wanted. I wanna know what ya think! Thanks:)
| chairmanmeow chapter 1 . 2/17/2005
It's a good poem. But I guess your emotions didn't really convey into words, or at least... this poem didn't connect with me. It's a good topic brought forth though.
| Drizit chapter 1 . 2/16/2005
Okay now this is a classic tale of a guy who is too hesitant. Understand your feeling here bro.
| Rezza Arcane chapter 1 . 2/16/2005
Bloody simple..yeah, sure..but definitely bloody good (this author is always good, ain't he ever tired of bein' good? -)
| citrus scented chapter 1 . 2/16/2005
nice work! This poems really powerful, i love the "burn" metaphore very effective.