Reviews for Truth in Dreams
i am pookie chapter 1 . 3/28/2005
Very interesting! It definitely keeps one reading to find out what exactly is going on. I really like the ending you had to this..."you are dead". Makes the poem mysterious. Very well written with a very unqiue, but awesome, style.
Strawberry Wish chapter 1 . 3/1/2005
This one totally stood out from the rest, I love the bolded words and how you expressed them in the sentence after them. It made the poem more powerful. This will definitely be put into one of my faves. ) Awesome job.
Karma Chameleon chapter 1 . 2/18/2005
You freak! *runs away* It's great. You should write more like this.
pyscho7 chapter 1 . 2/16/2005
interesting...just random well, a bit choppy and could use a little patch work but I can see it in my head clearly. Very nice touch with the bold and the ending.. excellent ending
k-b-cook chapter 1 . 2/16/2005
Very premonition like and creepy. The style is new to me but I think I like it because it is simple adn allows you to jump around a bit without losing the connection.

Please return R&R if possible. Thanks!