Reviews for Undeserving
Rosanna28 chapter 1 . 2/22/2005
Oh my god! This is so amazing! I'm in a lack of words right now, if that's the right way to say it. I don't know what to say...

You're really an amazing poet.

Thank you so much for your review on my poem 'gift of life'. I found it hard to believe that you actually liked it, same as Matthew, because you both write poetry that's so deep! And mine is...well, far from that!

I think I'm gonna learn alot from you!

NEVER stop writing!

Much love,

Rosanna.
Matthew James Current chapter 1 . 2/22/2005
My darling.
Aubrey Solenge chapter 1 . 2/16/2005
That was an excelent one. You did a good job on the imagery, something I need to work on. I wonder... did the angel turn into a vampire? The tears of blood may suggest it.
carleen chapter 1 . 2/16/2005
wow, its a really powerful piece. i really liked it. hope you keep writting.
SayIt'sWrong chapter 1 . 2/16/2005
This is really beautiful. So many amazing emotions described in it. The last stanza makes it end really well. Really well done. QueenVixta