Reviews for Layers
bleakly chapter 1 . 5/30/2005
You made a very clear visual in my mind with the first four lines. Good job.
Cloud Burst chapter 1 . 4/9/2005
great! ur simple words paint a picture in my mind. great poem!
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 2/17/2005
wow.. very powerful & beqautifully written
Crazy Biene chapter 1 . 2/17/2005
GREAT! It so cool, and well formulated. Love the flow, the word choice, and its really good een though it does not rhyme ! GR8!
dustytiger chapter 1 . 2/16/2005
great peice,short and powerful, thank you for sharing