|Reviews for Unmotivated|
| chasing givenchy chapter 4 . 2/2/2009
While I understand this isn't meant to be taken seriously, it was still a really good laugh and a worthwhile read. (I'm definitely recommending this one to a friend, who insists that stories, like movies, aren't really all that great if it doesn't have the least smidgeon of romance. I admit those stereotype-breakers are rare,) but yours is one in a million, IMHO. For a dozen reasons.
Elie was fantastic. Very mish-mash taste in music, though, but I really liked how she came off, definitely not as a Mary Sue, with the funny hair and blaring techno. (Gah, I wish I could get away with that stuff at school.) Throughout, she definitely is the most funny, most likeable eighth-grader I've ever encountered (kids, IMHO, are the runts of the litter and should be shot.)
Lucius made me lol. His entry was crackerjack, and the God of Motivation? (Homg, I so totally need one.) In fact, all the gods were really tongue-in-cheek; Lalakira was beautifully weird and annoying, and I adored Aralyn ("who needs chocolate more than a bad-tempered goddess of conflict with PMS?") The ice cream scene made for a great ending.
The "slacking off until apocalypse" line was brilliant. In fact, if you hadn't already disclaimed this as a crackfic, it would be very easy to read a hundred deeper meanings of apt socio-community commentary in this one. I loved how this could be double-layered without coming off as pretentious on any level; reminds me of "Alice in Wonderland," heh. xP
Here's to hoping you write more mindless humour in future!
| Jay Ehm Ee chapter 4 . 8/16/2008
this is great! XD and that would explain a few things... love the random alien-invasion attempt
| Jessi 'Pixie' Watson chapter 4 . 12/5/2006
You arn't writing anymore? but its so good. I LOVE IT! it's so funny. Luc is wicked, and so's everyone else!
| multiples of six chapter 4 . 4/4/2006
Hehehe this was funny & far too cute. And those pictures are adorable! I love Elie, she cracks me up. D
| Livi Z chapter 1 . 4/1/2006
Found this posted thu livejournal, so I thought I'd mosey on over and see how you were doing.
Apparently, you are well rested. But I really like this story. Nice cliffhanger, and its a change of character from all the ones who do...stuff in general. Update soon, or...well...I dunno what I'll do, but I'll be all sad.
| Moi Dix Mois chapter 4 . 7/1/2005
Wow. That was the perfect way to end it. Lol. Great job. ; Erm, did I not review for the first wo chapters? I think I was being lazy...XD
| TwystedFate chapter 4 . 6/21/2005
You. Are. So. Amazing. I admire your bladant cynicism and your ability to draw me into your world. Anxiously awaiting for more.
| J chapter 1 . 3/20/2005
good job. keep going.
| J chapter 2 . 3/20/2005
| Silverleaf-Rand chapter 4 . 3/1/2005
Is it bad that the thought of the gods getting smashed brings back my faith in the universe? :)
"Bad-tempered goddess of conflict with PMS" eh? A VERY bad combination if i ever hurd one.
Keep up the writing and making me laugh!
| gossamerdragon chapter 4 . 3/1/2005
lol! can i be the international friend? :P.. sorry I'm sorta sugar high... goddess of minor scuffles? *laughs* thats great!I dunno why but her outfit sounds half cool! anyways, your story kicked ass!
| camouflagecamel chapter 3 . 2/27/2005
This is an awesome story. Somehow, I can so relate to Elie. I love the dialogue, especially Elie's:
"Dude, you're kinda in my bed. That's not cool."
"Remember the slacker's motto? 'Somebody else will take care of it.'"
This is a great humor story, random and abstract, making it PURE AWESOMENESS, BABY! Kudos,
| Moi Dix Mois chapter 3 . 2/24/2005
Ohohohoho!How amusing...Okay, anyways, THIS KICKS AS*
| Silverleaf-Rand chapter 3 . 2/20/2005
'Somebody else will take care of it.'
Got to remember that one :D, Keep up the lazyness...Which is a contradiction to strive with effort for lazyness which is lack of effort...
Will the inept invading aliens make another aperence?
| gossamerdragon chapter 3 . 2/20/2005
lol maybe :P I'm not going to guess anymore!the poor ice cream shop! Cy sounds randomly cool though! Days just sounds even better!I can't help picturing random drunk gods... heheh... anyway i wanna know who the other god is! _