While I understand this isn't meant to be taken seriously, it was still a really good laugh and a worthwhile read. (I'm definitely recommending this one to a friend, who insists that stories, like movies, aren't really all that great if it doesn't have the least smidgeon of romance. I admit those stereotype-breakers are rare,) but yours is one in a million, IMHO. For a dozen reasons.

Elie was fantastic. Very mish-mash taste in music, though, but I really liked how she came off, definitely not as a Mary Sue, with the funny hair and blaring techno. (Gah, I wish I could get away with that stuff at school.) Throughout, she definitely is the most funny, most likeable eighth-grader I've ever encountered (kids, IMHO, are the runts of the litter and should be shot.)

Lucius made me lol. His entry was crackerjack, and the God of Motivation? (Homg, I so totally need one.) In fact, all the gods were really tongue-in-cheek; Lalakira was beautifully weird and annoying, and I adored Aralyn ("who needs chocolate more than a bad-tempered goddess of conflict with PMS?") The ice cream scene made for a great ending.

The "slacking off until apocalypse" line was brilliant. In fact, if you hadn't already disclaimed this as a crackfic, it would be very easy to read a hundred deeper meanings of apt socio-community commentary in this one. I loved how this could be double-layered without coming off as pretentious on any level; reminds me of "Alice in Wonderland," heh. xP

Here's to hoping you write more mindless humour in future!

this is great! XD and that would explain a few things... love the random alien-invasion attempt

You arn't writing anymore? but its so good. I LOVE IT! it's so funny. Luc is wicked, and so's everyone else!

Hehehe this was funny & far too cute. And those pictures are adorable! I love Elie, she cracks me up. D

Found this posted thu livejournal, so I thought I'd mosey on over and see how you were doing.

Apparently, you are well rested. But I really like this story. Nice cliffhanger, and its a change of character from all the ones who do...stuff in general. Update soon, or...well...I dunno what I'll do, but I'll be all sad.

Wow. That was the perfect way to end it. Lol. Great job. ; Erm, did I not review for the first wo chapters? I think I was being lazy...XD

You. Are. So. Amazing. I admire your bladant cynicism and your ability to draw me into your world. Anxiously awaiting for more.

good job. keep going.

awesome.

Is it bad that the thought of the gods getting smashed brings back my faith in the universe? :)

"Bad-tempered goddess of conflict with PMS" eh? A VERY bad combination if i ever hurd one.

Keep up the writing and making me laugh!

lol! can i be the international friend? :P.. sorry I'm sorta sugar high... goddess of minor scuffles? *laughs* thats great!I dunno why but her outfit sounds half cool! anyways, your story kicked ass!

This is an awesome story. Somehow, I can so relate to Elie. I love the dialogue, especially Elie's:

"Dude, you're kinda in my bed. That's not cool."

"Remember the slacker's motto? 'Somebody else will take care of it.'"

This is a great humor story, random and abstract, making it PURE AWESOMENESS, BABY! Kudos,

-Kirby

Ohohohoho!How amusing...Okay, anyways, THIS KICKS AS*

'Somebody else will take care of it.'

Got to remember that one :D, Keep up the lazyness...Which is a contradiction to strive with effort for lazyness which is lack of effort...

Will the inept invading aliens make another aperence?

lol maybe :P I'm not going to guess anymore!the poor ice cream shop! Cy sounds randomly cool though! Days just sounds even better!I can't help picturing random drunk gods... heheh... anyway i wanna know who the other god is! _