Reviews for I could have been with you
renee chapter 1 . 7/21/2005
wow..amazing..your such a good writer..im onli gonna review on this one..tho..cuz i love all of your things..and thts to many great reviews..lol..your an amazing writer..and wow..these stories..adn poems..adn stuff..are just amazing
TheDevilsAngel09 chapter 1 . 6/20/2005
great poem jer, love how you have use powerful words to describe what you were thinking, excellent fav line would have to be the last two.

"and i ask myslef "man is this worth it?". then lock up the answer for our time"

wow love those line very powerful... amazing poem.

Laura