Reviews for Speechless
Cloud Burst chapter 1 . 6/25/2005
great sentence structure, and over all, great work!
Mangus Beast chapter 1 . 5/31/2005
Hm... Interesting. It increased my vocabulary a great deal, as your writing always does. I can't wait until you make the second one-shot.
Ann Crimson chapter 1 . 3/5/2005
Hey, Good job! I love the descriptions. Still a little wordy though. But it is a wonderful beginning!
addie pray chapter 1 . 2/27/2005
Lovely. Awesome descriptions, well rounded. Considering this piece of work, I would definitely ask you to keep writing (and posting). Couple typos, that's all there is to fix. Well done!
forget about it chapter 1 . 2/22/2005
cool! I love how you used desriptive words to create such a cool mood! You've got to write more!

-gg89
princess max chapter 1 . 2/17/2005
Hey, you finally posted something! This is your standout line 'Of course sometimes contradiction is the key to human decision' Too true. Good job in setting the scene and following it through without dialogue.