|Reviews for Child in Grave|
| msdewey chapter 1 . 7/26/2005
Okay, this was an interesting story ... sort of ;-) I have a question tho - did the demons running through literally curse the women with the babies, or ... something weirder? Also, it was NOT the baby's fault that his mother was put to death - she chose to pursue a course of action that had, as she was warned, lethal consiquences. The blame game could be played in tons of ways - the demon that caused the pregnancy, her for pursuing the "raising" option, the voice from behind the curtain that sentenced her ... the baby was just a inocent bystander. The eyeball things are cute though ... reminds me of something ;-)The story sets an interesting scene, not sure about the earrings though. We'll see what significants they hold.
| Midnight Predator chapter 1 . 2/18/2005
Gah, I'm too lazy to log in.
Ah. So that's how Seth came to be. Heh, everytime you update I'm all like "Hey Seth, that person on fictionpress is writing about you again." and my boyfriend gives me funny looks. It's great.
happy hunting, Midnight Predator