|Reviews for bones|
| Melissa chapter 1 . 8/10/2014
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Melissa Thinks: "bones" is a wonderfully beautiful poem. With astonishing phrases like "ribbed boy breath" and "february bones", la nuit mes yeux t'eclairent writes in a way that captivates and resonates with her audience. The alliteration ("boy breath" herself a home") weaves in perfectly with the rest of the poem to create a lovely picture in your mind. From the choice of words, to the rhythm - this poem is a powerful and memorable addition to the poetry section of FictionPress.
| Little girl Big world chapter 1 . 12/26/2009
This was wonderful.
Each word was powerful.
Well written :)
| colorful chapter 1 . 11/23/2009
beautiful beautiful beautiful
| tonight we bloom chapter 1 . 10/3/2009
this is beautiful... adding to my favorites
| One-Hand Clap chapter 1 . 4/20/2008
What I loved about this poem was the phrasing - the words you chose. They were just so... so... so... superb! Honestly! 'ribbed boy breath' My God! It was just... It took my breath away, truly!
However, I did not like the phrase 'february bones', but only because I did not understand what it was in reference to.
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| godsandstars chapter 1 . 11/3/2006
This is sad and beautiful.
| caralita chapter 1 . 9/7/2006
i loved this. the whole thing is so beautiful
| mezzie chapter 1 . 4/23/2006
leaves me pretty much speechless. this is exactly what it's like.
| the naked civil servant chapter 1 . 2/4/2006
oh my FUCKING GOD. that is... that is... amazing? i cannot fathom it to save my life and it makes me shiver like i'll never stop.
| crinkled aster ribbon chapter 1 . 11/18/2005
It's so darkly beautiful. I adore your poems.
| poetic abortion chapter 1 . 6/17/2005
the whole thing is gorgeous. the only words that can plainly describe this.
| godawful teen-angst poetry chapter 1 . 6/11/2005
gah, but you're good. I wish I'd discovered you sooner. The last two lines are brilliant.
| Escapist chapter 1 . 5/16/2005
february bones the most perfect description of anything that I've heard in such a long time.
This whole poem is gorgeous.
| Nobody-n-Particular chapter 1 . 4/29/2005
Profound and haunting with a hint of the fleeting sensual
| if sighing chapter 1 . 4/23/2005
*I love nothing more than the word feburary.
*But nothing may just be this poem.
*It's unrolling silk