Reviews for Outcast
Aryaveiel Skycryer chapter 1 . 2/20/2005
Wow...how did I miss this one? I liked it, a lot. For once I won't criticize the use of the seasons again, because it really worked for the poem. Actually, I think this shall be favorited! Yeah, I liked it that much. Just can't express in words why.
TrueToMyself chapter 1 . 2/17/2005
*applause* Amazing! There is an incredible amount of emotion packed into this poem. I love your writing style, and you went to the next line at the perfect time. You used many descriptive words here, and they really convey your meaning. The repitition also helps, and adds emphasis to the word "wait." Keep writing!

~*~If I reviewed you, kindly return the favor! -TrueToMyself~*~
Amaryllis-lily chapter 1 . 2/17/2005
Wonderfully written,fresh, and (I think) optimistic!

This poem gives me hope. :)