|Reviews for Love Me Again number 2|
| A Face Worth Remembering chapter 1 . 3/16/2005
Good job, i know the feeling too.
| THROUGHTHESEEYES chapter 1 . 2/28/2005
My daughter could've said this...She's comed to terms with it and is now laughing about the guy- how she could have put up with him as long as she did. I told her at least she's learning about what kind of guy she'll want next time. Love doesn't always work that way-it could hit you out of left field, before you see it coming!Great poem.
| morbidme chapter 1 . 2/26/2005
strong and powerful its short very ver yshort tho XmeX
| under estimated artistsoul chapter 1 . 2/22/2005
Another sad one that is written with so much passions of love behind it. Amazing work.
| Ivriniel chapter 1 . 2/20/2005
That's very sad... But it's a great haiku, though.
| Cry Tears of Darkness chapter 1 . 2/20/2005
thats so sad, awesome job though
| Manuel Fajar chapter 1 . 2/20/2005
when love surrounds heart,
everything's a nail,—hammer,
only one tool works.
wooden fences rot,
metal enclosures rust red,—
¿what then of pure love?
yellow sun,—green shoots,
cactus oval-flat captures,—
even without water's touch,
in the middle of dry sand.
turned the light switch on,
but the lightbulb popped and fused,—
sometimes love explodes.
"¡dad, but not a cad!"
sad lad exclaimed when she left,—
next time he left her.
| Katterpiller chapter 1 . 2/19/2005
That is totally how i feel summed up in 3 lines lol good job!i liked it alot :)
| Jamie Giacomelli chapter 1 . 2/19/2005
not the best short poem ive read, but very good nonetheless. Effective use of language
| somefreakylooknchick chapter 1 . 2/18/2005
man.. depressing. That feeling sucks. Your other poems that I've read are so detailed and stuff.. this one isn't.. but it says alot without wasted effort.. good job.
| Crazy Biene chapter 1 . 2/18/2005
wonderful haiku. I love how simple haikus are. gr8 job!
| hiding behind amber eyes chapter 1 . 2/18/2005
true feelings. if at first you don't succeed try and try again...
| alluringdarkness7809 chapter 1 . 2/18/2005
I like how you started it -
| myno chapter 1 . 2/17/2005
it's okay... I'm not big on swearing.
| Anna178 chapter 1 . 2/17/2005
Again I don't really know how to review this...but trust me it's very good, I can never do short poems, or anything similar to a haiku.