Reviews for Love Me Again number 2
A Face Worth Remembering chapter 1 . 3/16/2005
Good job, i know the feeling too.

Elli
THROUGHTHESEEYES chapter 1 . 2/28/2005
My daughter could've said this...She's comed to terms with it and is now laughing about the guy- how she could have put up with him as long as she did. I told her at least she's learning about what kind of guy she'll want next time. Love doesn't always work that way-it could hit you out of left field, before you see it coming!Great poem.
morbidme chapter 1 . 2/26/2005
strong and powerful its short very ver yshort tho XmeX
under estimated artistsoul chapter 1 . 2/22/2005
Another sad one that is written with so much passions of love behind it. Amazing work.
Ivriniel chapter 1 . 2/20/2005
That's very sad... But it's a great haiku, though.
Cry Tears of Darkness chapter 1 . 2/20/2005
thats so sad, awesome job though
Manuel Fajar chapter 1 . 2/20/2005
when love surrounds heart,

everything's a nail,—hammer,

only one tool works.



wooden fences rot,

metal enclosures rust red,—

¿what then of pure love?



yellow sun,—green shoots,

cactus oval-flat captures,—

streaming energy,

even without water's touch,

in the middle of dry sand.



turned the light switch on,

but the lightbulb popped and fused,—

sometimes love explodes.



"¡dad, but not a cad!"

sad lad exclaimed when she left,—

next time he left her.
Katterpiller chapter 1 . 2/19/2005
That is totally how i feel summed up in 3 lines lol good job!i liked it alot :)

~Kath
Jamie Giacomelli chapter 1 . 2/19/2005
not the best short poem ive read, but very good nonetheless. Effective use of language
somefreakylooknchick chapter 1 . 2/18/2005
man.. depressing. That feeling sucks. Your other poems that I've read are so detailed and stuff.. this one isn't.. but it says alot without wasted effort.. good job.
Crazy Biene chapter 1 . 2/18/2005
wonderful haiku. I love how simple haikus are. gr8 job!
hiding behind amber eyes chapter 1 . 2/18/2005
true feelings. if at first you don't succeed try and try again...
alluringdarkness7809 chapter 1 . 2/18/2005
I like how you started it -
myno chapter 1 . 2/17/2005
it's okay... I'm not big on swearing.
Anna178 chapter 1 . 2/17/2005
Again I don't really know how to review this...but trust me it's very good, I can never do short poems, or anything similar to a haiku.

~ANNA
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