Reviews for Tongue
Cloud Burst chapter 1 . 4/9/2005
love with an undercurrent of menace and darkness. this was great!
this is britt chapter 1 . 2/20/2005
Do I sense some resentment in here? heheh. No, it was a good poem. Honestly- I think you're a talented writer. Keep writing!
shadowz-333 chapter 1 . 2/20/2005
Wow, this one is great! I really like this!
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 2/18/2005
lol.. taht was funny
DukDog27 chapter 1 . 2/18/2005
Although it's probably not the response you were going for, I burst into horrid, uncontrolable laughter when I finished reading it. A well done work that has alerted me to the fact I may need phychiatric help, say thankee.
hiding behind amber eyes chapter 1 . 2/18/2005
wow Aaron, like the metaphors. creepy...i'm going to have to get you to explain this one! good job though
dustytiger chapter 1 . 2/17/2005
great peice, i think i know someone who feels exactly this about me right now... thank you for sharing