|Reviews for Still|
| Cloud Burst chapter 1 . 4/9/2005
nice, very deep and vivid and powerful. keep these coming!
| this is britt chapter 1 . 2/20/2005
shockingly vivid. "at her bloods and her acids"- I really loved the bulimia metaphor. Graphic, but good.
| shadowz-333 chapter 1 . 2/20/2005
Interesting, It has a good format.
| simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 2/18/2005
wow.. im not sure i totally get it buty the images are very powerful
| Crazy Biene chapter 1 . 2/18/2005
u r right, this is deep stuff. It takes more than to read it once than to get it. U ne what I mean? I really enjyoed it, I would say this is the most original poem I have read in ages. The puknig was kinda gross, lol, especially if u can imagine it .
ps- i live in Vienna (Wien)
| hiding behind amber eyes chapter 1 . 2/18/2005
hum...interesting. the first part was good, but it kinda scared me. lol keep posting!
| dustytiger chapter 1 . 2/17/2005
not sure whta it's about exactly but i like it, thank you for sharing
| Crimson-Escape chapter 1 . 2/17/2005
That was really good. It's very moving. I could actually feel what your poem was about. Keep up the good work.