Reviews for Untitled
this is my love for you chapter 1 . 3/12/2005
Short but powerful.
Luki Dimension chapter 1 . 2/18/2005
You really need to come up for a name for this one! It's short but very powerful!
Sunflower dream chapter 1 . 2/18/2005
i really like the magic and the mythology that you bring in to your descriptions of nature! i like your work
Le Rose Clair du Nuit chapter 1 . 2/18/2005
I'd Call it Gaia something... ;; Lots of imagery... And the metaphor of the mother's womb makes a good point. Good show!

the Mistress Joe

"No, no, no! My name is Mistress Joe!"

"Fine, 'MISTRESS'."

"See it doesn't work with you... (."
elvenstorm chapter 1 . 2/18/2005
Ooh this is so mother earthish :) How about the title being something to do with that or elements. Has a great feel to it this poem. Well done!