Reviews for Reverance
FunkyFlower chapter 1 . 7/15/2005
great poem! loved this for being so unique. the vocab and imagery is just amazing! wonderful work! plus thanx for the review but do u really believe in friendships always coming to an end sooner or later? i disagree with u on that point but maybe i just dont hav the experience or summit. i guess i'd like 2 believe that atleast 1 friend would remain true 2 me for all my life. anyway, thanx for the heads up. once again, amazing poem, short but full of imagery! well done!
Luki Dimension chapter 1 . 2/18/2005
'Reverance' is different from what I've read so far, but its definitely my favourite. However, I don't think the last line is necessary. It breaks off the pattern and the flow of what was already a near perfect poem.