Reviews for Dusk
writerforever chapter 1 . 6/29/2005
A pretty piece. Good job!
this is my love for you chapter 1 . 3/12/2005
I like the descriptions... i love dusk, and nighttime also.
Oriel Vaughn chapter 1 . 2/19/2005
Great imagery and personification! I like the fifth and sixth lines especially; the many adverbs are nice :) oh but it should be "reluctance" and "grace" shouldn't it? "Reluctant" and "graceful" are adjectives, and what she shows should be nouns...Oh, and one more thing (even though it's quite irrelevant): I love your username
Luki Dimension chapter 1 . 2/18/2005
I'm not too sure about 'Dusk'. The words and descriptions are good, but it feels a little flat...for lack of a better word.
Sunflower dream chapter 1 . 2/18/2005
wow! i love the poetry of the words, and the imagery! its really beautiful! good job!