|Reviews for Greenboughs|
| zeecrazyeggbloos chapter 1 . 7/11/2005
oh, pretty. i always come up with something cool when i'm walking around and then once i make it to paper, i forget. :P you seemed to have lucked out though. :) really pretty, paints a lovely picture in my head. and good job with the rhyming! you pulled it off pretty damn well. lots of people have to like...twist their sentences over and crap just to make it work but yours is really natural which adds an extra rhythm. pretty. :)
btw, no i do not play cello, but i DO play viola. :) and i agree, the mustard-colored ones are butt-ugly. blech.
| Luki Dimension chapter 1 . 2/18/2005
I'm assuming this is describing somewhere you've been before. I'd be lying if I said I knew anything about the structure of poems, but I like the feel of 'Greenboughs'. It has a light, tranquil feel through the words, and you can really visualise the area.