Reviews for Hanging In Air
Nobody-n-Particular chapter 1 . 5/7/2005
Ah, I like this. "slant of the wing" Nice.
Calliope Foster chapter 1 . 3/18/2005
Wow, this is so awesome. Sometimes I don't like Haiku, but yours has a good rhythm and provacative nature. Good work! Keep in touch review wise!
Allayna chapter 1 . 2/25/2005
That is a cool thought.
somefreakylooknchick chapter 1 . 2/19/2005
wow! this is amazing.
Rocky G chapter 1 . 2/18/2005
Very cool Haiku, I like the concept.

Rocky :)
Ahrar chapter 1 . 2/18/2005
Hey, that was cool, Hershey. Usually I'm not too into Haikus (they always kinda come across to me as being trite) but this is cool, because it's something to think about: That troubles are sometimes a matter of stuff, as always, M'Lady.*Bows*_Ahrar
An-Author-At-Heart chapter 1 . 2/18/2005
Short, simple but sweet - it was nice. I never really thought of the idea you portray: how flying and falling are the same but it depends on the slant of the wings. Isn't that some food for thought! You make the reader think, I like that. It was also put nicely into a haiku, a specific kind of poem that shows the knowledge of poetry of the writer. Good job, keep it up.