Reviews for Hanging In Air |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Ah, I like this. "slant of the wing" Nice. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow, this is so awesome. Sometimes I don't like Haiku, but yours has a good rhythm and provacative nature. Good work! Keep in touch review wise! |
![]() ![]() ![]() That is a cool thought. |
![]() ![]() ![]() wow! this is amazing. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very cool Haiku, I like the concept. Rocky :) |
![]() ![]() Hey, that was cool, Hershey. Usually I'm not too into Haikus (they always kinda come across to me as being trite) but this is cool, because it's something to think about: That troubles are sometimes a matter of stuff, as always, M'Lady.*Bows*_Ahrar |
![]() ![]() ![]() Short, simple but sweet - it was nice. I never really thought of the idea you portray: how flying and falling are the same but it depends on the slant of the wings. Isn't that some food for thought! You make the reader think, I like that. It was also put nicely into a haiku, a specific kind of poem that shows the knowledge of poetry of the writer. Good job, keep it up. |