Reviews for Click Click Click
writergurlLW chapter 1 . 5/26/2006
great short story! i wanted to think of another title for you but my mind has went completely and utterly blank
Inherent chapter 1 . 4/6/2005
I really liked the way you worded everything. The ending is really good as one shot. 'No one but myself does walk this path.' I don't know if you wanted it that way but no one but myself walks this path might sound a little better. Besides that this was very very good.
jeek chapter 1 . 4/5/2005
wow. REALLY good. the summary kinda confuzed me though. i thought it was about a haunted house at like a carnival or something. not a real haunted house
Greg chapter 1 . 2/27/2005
Suspenseful and frightening. Well done.
Matt Robin chapter 1 . 2/19/2005
Wow! That was a great short story. You write very well in the first person and I hope you will do more first person stories.
Jessie My Love chapter 1 . 2/19/2005
wow...i mean wow...

You were right I think your stories are better then your poetry (if possible) lolz. Anyaways great job loved it :)

*WF
slave to the voices chapter 1 . 2/19/2005
Great writing! The imagery and description were very good. And the repitition of click, click, click was very effective. Nice work, keep writing.

**Slave**
lemonysnicketrulz chapter 1 . 2/18/2005
Good story just a few mistakes. I actually felt as though i was really there and dying.

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