Reviews for Nightmare Mists
Ninja Commander chapter 1 . 12/5/2005
Sweet. Sounds like a ninja. Prolly is.
Jessie My Love chapter 1 . 2/19/2005
I love your poems they are so good! The only thing i would improve on is your summeries...they are just to...nothing. Like make the poem sound errie...

Summery: Purple eyes, watching you,As silver hair doth blow. Death will not come easily. It will be nice and slow.

Just using part of your poem makes a more intresting summery, and the summery is what gets people to eat the poem
DementedOracle chapter 1 . 2/18/2005
Ah ha. Now here's a good fantasy poem. Nicely done. Oddly, I can't decide whether I hate the woman for her evilness, or like her for her fascinating power. I guess it's okay to like a villian, right?
Ahemait chapter 1 . 2/18/2005
oh very cool! you have good describtive words and awesome imagery. botht he idea and the writing were excellent.