Reviews for Untitled
youzi chapter 1 . 4/2/2005
Beautiful piece...especially the last stanza! Keep writing D
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 4/1/2005
beautiful... id call it rain
Simply Stupid chapter 1 . 3/25/2005
The last stanza really is powerful. You can clearly get the image in your head. Well done, this is beautiful.
contrast and friction chapter 1 . 2/24/2005
[but the rain is a deceiveracid looks beautifulwhen it hides amidst glitterit mixes with the tears on my faceand they hide each other]

That is so beautiful. The imagery is heart wrenching.

Thanks for reviewing my poem 'The Unforgiven' I appreciated it )
thedarkthatiwas chapter 1 . 2/20/2005
This is a beautiful poem. I love the imagery, and the metaphors used. Thankyou so so much for reviewing my poem, so happy you liked it because most people don't like that sort of darkish stuff. Your poem is very very good as well... Excellent. It's added to my favs list!
VampireWinter chapter 1 . 2/20/2005
Hey! i really really like this poem. One of the best i have read so far. So keep up the good work and keep on posting your writings. Oh and, thanks for the review! i'm glad you liked mine!
unjaundiced chapter 1 . 2/20/2005
nicely done. interesting how you chose to only capitalize the middle stanza. heh, i never really had to deal with acid rain, but sounds .. special. new way of using an old cliche, i like ya, thanks for the review on my sleep deprived ramblings haha
Clap Clap Raise Your Hands chapter 1 . 2/20/2005
Wow, very good, keep up the good work! and thanks for the reviews, x weasel within x
InfiniteDreamer04 chapter 1 . 2/19/2005
wow! deep. seriously awesome. i liked the line:

"Acid looks beautiful/When it hides amidst glitter"

Keep writing: it can only make you better.

-dare to dream-
Jamie Giacomelli chapter 1 . 2/19/2005
woah, deep. I love this poem, excellent write. Vivid descriptions are brilliant. Love the line, 'dancing against my face'. good job, keep it up
b-U-b-TRUE chapter 1 . 2/18/2005
This is good! I think you could have phrased a few things differently like "the rain deceives" instead of "the rain is a deceiver" sounds awkward, but nice description
TheCrystalMaiden chapter 1 . 2/18/2005
Excellent! I like the imagery, and the message is cool too.