|Reviews for Her Star|
| It Sounds Horrible chapter 1 . 2/26/2006
This is really beautiful. The "star light star bright..." part is a very nice addition.
"It's radiance only matched by the reflection in her eyes"
I especially enjoyed this line.
| Cry Tears of Darkness chapter 1 . 3/21/2005
beautiful, again. its just great. hope things stay good for you two.
| ginnyellen chapter 1 . 3/14/2005
Woah... you made me cry with this one... amazing! You seem to be really in love, good for you. I've got one question though... how do you get so much inspiration? There are moments in which I've got a lot of ideas but a minute later I can't seem to find what to write about... and that's frustrating! Anyhow... amazing piece, absolutely loved it!
| Clap Clap Raise Your Hands chapter 1 . 3/6/2005
So beautiful, this made me smile, I love the use of intertextuality near the end, that's what made the poem for me. x weasel within x
| LiebchenRose chapter 1 . 2/19/2005
*sniffs* It's beautiful...ah love. Thank you!~Hawke
| aquamoon222 chapter 1 . 2/19/2005
oh, very beautiful! this is quite lovely! I love the imagry and that you added the wish upon a star song. I really like this!
please r&r some of my stuff if it's no troble!